my 1 hour take on this...all from rough...i guess im getting slower the minute...hmm....my eye for color is definately very weak. The porportions are still....alright...i didn't do any adjustment. The reason why it was so bloody long for one hour was because of my main sketch...and halfway i decided to do less details on the background...thus you can see it is really very rough in the bg....main intention not on details, just painting the feeling....didn't get it right this time round...but its ok for sharing failure...lolx.